Translation Check by Chrouya
Script: Black Rock Shooter - 04 [Edit-Scarlet][fixed timing].ass
Workraw: BRS 04 WR.avi

* ==> Sidenotes when needed

The first two karaoke lines:

ブラックロックシューター　何処へ行ったの？
Black Rock Shooter, doko he itta no?
Black Rock Shooter, where did you go?
*I also noticed the ー are placed wrong in the current vertical kanji karaoke*
*In vertical style, they are also written vertically*

聞こえますか？
Kikoemasu ka?
Can you hear me?

15
*sounds like she says kinbae, which means bluebottle, a blue coloured fly*
*A bug is more accurate, but a smurf quite fits the situation. Just a sidenote*

50
I'm a bit disappointed.
*"disappointed" is a better wording, but discouraged is not wrong.

83
Because I was exhausted!
*side note spam! again, I myself find "exhausted" better than "tired", implying she doesn't have the strength.

85
*is fine, don't know why it's commented with "Help"*
*I thought of "Those are bad manners", but I think this sounds somewhat like broken English*

117
I realised it when you were telling me off; 
*refers to the time back at the end of episode 2*

243
But you see, I don't really remember being useless without you anymore.
*a better and shorter version of the comment placed, as this sounds less negative and fits the translation*


257 (the title sign)
The World I Dreamt of Will Close One Day
*itsuka refers to tojiru, and this also makes tojiru future tense.
*it would've been fluently correct if it were ichido instead.
*this sentence is also in the song (OP) itself, take notice of that.
*I prefer British spelling over all else, so I wrote Dreamt instead of Dreamed.

260 (the poster)
*Yeah, somehow it says week, but it lasts the whole year...*